Analysis of Mourning for Roger



Roger liked to play guitar,
But he couldn’t play very well,
So he hung around the few of us
Who thought we could help.

Roger liked to laugh
And always had a joke to tell
While making rounds
As the Forward Electrician
Non-nuke
As they like to say in the Navy
When I guy was an engineering type
But deficient by not being selected for the Nuclear Power Program.

Roger liked to play hearts
And we would play
To the wee hours of the morning,
Though morning is just a figment
When you ride a submarine for a living.

Roger never was pretentious
Even though he was first class.
He just lived his life and laughed his laugh
And everyone enjoyed his company.

Roger was on leave one night
Laughing his laugh and enjoying life with his buddies
And subordinates
As they like to say in the Navy
When a guy goes out with those
Who happen to be inferior
In rank.

Roger never saw the headlights
As he crossed the road in Kings Bay, Georgia
Where the boat was docked
For refit
As they like to say in the Navy
When a guy works with his friends
To prepare for frigid war.

Roger died there in the street...

...then the sun came up the next morning,
Though mourning is just a figment
When you ride a submarine for a living.


Scheme xabx caxxxDxx xxefE bxcd xxxDxxx xxxxDxx x efE
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 1111101 111010111 11111 10111 0110111 1101 10100010 11 111110010 1111110101 1010111001010100101 101111 0111 101101010 11011010 1110101010 10101010 1011111 111110111 010011100 1011111 1011001011110 0010 111110010 1011111 110110100 01 1010101 1110101110 10111 101 111110010 1011111 1011101 1011001 101110110 11011010 1110101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,180
Words 233
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 5, 4, 7, 7, 1, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by GregLanier on May 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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