Analysis of Death in winter
Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)
A life is lost in winter
On Melbourne’s frigid streets,
In Fisher Street, an alleyway
A heart no longer beats.
In a blanket in dense shrubbery
A young man, old before his time,
Lies huddled ‘gainst the winter chill
Until they make a ghastly find.
The police go in to investigate
Alerted by a noxious stench,
And from the blanket’s putrefaction
Protrudes a single fist in clench.
Remains too foul to mention
Are of a man long dead,
Attacked while sleeping in the shrubs
For twenty years his only bed.
Syringes lie around the corpse
The signature of those who kill,
Who took this poor man’s empty life
Exulting in their monstrous thrill.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts,
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | XAXA XXBX XCDC DEXE XBXB XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111010 11101 0101110 011101 001001100 01110111 11010101 01110101 001101010 01010101 010101 1010101 0111110 110111 01110001 11011101 01010101 01001111 11111101 01001101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 694 |
Words | 123 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 94 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
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