Analysis of Keep doing something rather than doing nothing.



Keep doing something rather than doing nothing.  

Keep doing something rather than doing nothing.
See innovative creativity & good dealing & feeling
One day stumble at will come out of some finding
Unless you move in nothing will move is the inkling

It keeps you busy, keep away from negative thinking
Positive thinking is the fundamental light of good living
Once you go negative, get caught in negative dealing
so keep thinking of something good for carefree living

We being confused remain in confusion will get nothing
In confusion we forgot the sanity, keep others confusing
Why we keep doing unless Alarm Bells give us warning
Lost trust in The Wheel of Fortune in Reverse its moving

Now we are in bad situation see lot of loops are missing
But we keep doing from it any lesson we're not learning.
See we're at the verge of collapse still no solution coming
From nowhere Corona Virus is in thousands of are got killing

World is in 'Lock down' facing an upheaval task of sensing
We being on 'Wrong Path', still keep doing what we're doing
Carrying huge baggage of past as gave up 'An Ethical Living'
What is around us 'A Cause of Sins'. come back I'm waiting


Scheme A Aaaa aaaa aaaa aaaa aaaa
Poetic Form
Metre 110101011010 110101011010 1100010011010 111011111110 0111010111010 11110101110010 100101001011110 11110011010010 111011011110 110010100101110 00101010100110010 11110010111110 11001110001110 111010101111110 111101110101110 111011011101010 1101010101011110 110111010101110 11011111101110 10011011111110010 11011011111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,153
Words 207
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on April 25, 2023

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