Analysis of Bedtime Animal Poems for Children



When it gets dark, I climb the highest tree
To watch as far as I can see
High in the top I bounce my chest
I then bend some branches to make my nest
I like to do this every night
To sleep tight until the morning light

When it gets dark, I open my big round eyes
To look for the small and larger mice
Those I eat the whole night through
I swallow them whole, for I can’t chew
But the hairs and bones I don’t like at all
So I throw up a hairy ball

When it gets dark, it is getting cool
So I climb out of my muddy pool
I stretch my legs and jump around
To see what insects can be found
My mouth gets full with sticky slime
My tongue rolls out: its dinner time

When it gets dark, I leave my den
To see if there is some nice food again
I run around and eat and eat
Until I can hardly move my feet
Then I return all satisfied
And sleep the whole day until it is night

When it gets dark, I leave my tree
To fly around with my family
I need no light to find my food
With my radar I can see just as good
When my belly is full and I start to yawn
I go back to sleep, upside down


Scheme AABBCC XXDDEE FFGGHH IIJJXC AAXXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111110101 11111111 10011111 1111101111 111111001 111010101 11111101111 111010101 1110111 110111111 1010111111 11110101 111111101 111111101 11110101 1111111 11111101 11111101 11111111 1111111101 11010101 011110111 1101110 0101101111 11111111 110111100 11111111 111111111 11101101111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,088
Words 245
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted by ludy_b on May 02, 2021

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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