Analysis of Unnoticed / Onopgemerkt



the well in the midst of hills
-caressed by wind- it softly echoes
complaints of the unobserved

adrift along the bricks muted by moss
there is a still unnoticed solitude

there a gate restrains the shades
moves to mournfulness
a dungeon of distress
depth that perforates

as long as these slopes don’t level off
the hush-up will yearn on

de put temidden van heuvelland
in strelende wind echoot zacht
de klacht van het ongeziene

langs stenen met mos gesmoord
drijft nog immer ongehoorde eenzaamheid

waar een poort de kleuren dempt
in droefenis stemt
een gevangenis van verdriet
diepte die doorboort

zolang de glooiingen niet strijken
zucht het verborgene voort


Scheme AXB XB XAXX XC BBC BB BBBB CB
Poetic Form
Metre 0100111 011111010 01101 0101011011 110101010 1010101 111 010101 1110 111111101 011111 11111 01111 11111 11111 11111 111111 011 1111 111 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 639
Words 110
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 2, 3, 2, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by ludy_b on May 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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