Analysis of Mollusk of Old Days



Opening up parts of my past, I sadly see,
there have been low days in September,
that I would rather not remember,
because they’ve revealed a lie to me.

But if  I’d wiped those from my memory,
I would have lost their lovely fruits as well,
so I’ve compressed the prangs of history,
and tucked those away in a solid shell.

These days, when that time of year arrives,
I just reflect on the flows of our lives,
on how, in our own ways, we forbear
the losses that are simply lying there.


Scheme ABBA ACAC XXBX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 100111111101 111110010 111101010 011010111 1111111100 1111110111 1101011100 0110100101 111111101 11011011101 110101111 0101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 478
Words 93
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by ludy_b on April 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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