Analysis of As one in verse

Mark Cloutier 1972 (Kaneohe)



The moon casts light
Of the sun covered above
And a world unknown
Then it rains down stars
Of darkness and light
And one walks in the night
Upon the waters clear
Of a moon in sphere
Then they hear Words
Of color and fusion
Producing children
Who hear the light
Of words undisturbed
As they sleep of dreams
And awaken to life's vision
As death is put to bed
And the moon appears
In suns sphere
To hear the darkness
Of stars and the light
Of the sun covered above
As they all fall
As one in verse


Scheme aBcdaaeefggahigjkelaBmn
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 1011001 00101 11111 11001 011001 010101 10101 1111 110010 01010 1101 1101 11111 00101110 111111 00101 011 11010 11001 1011001 1111 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 472
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 395
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Submitted by Markcloutier on April 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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