Analysis of Your Sea Secret




Your sadness, deeper than a book
 Whose pages drip poetry
 Bound by leather, forged in pain
 Writ like ecsatsy
 Spoken aloud the words feel free
 Though the lines are cold
 Like the mirrors empty way-
 Reflecting all untold

The open road may call
 The fields may claim their need
 But you burn on paper thrones
 Lost in what you read
 And i loved your sad disguise
 How I held your tears
 Feeling heaven in your eyes
 Yet married to your fears.


Scheme XAXBACXC XXBXBBBB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 1101100 1110101 111 10010111 10111 1010101 010101 010111 011111 1111101 10111 0111101 11111 1010011 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 173
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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