Analysis of With the ring
It had almost vanished
The life dream was finished
You were seven seas far
For me a fading star
I was not disillusioned
It was inside and never questioned
I dare not it to be mentioned
You had many a timed cautioned
I remembered each and every minute thing
You were forever in mind to be missed for something
You had occupied most of the golden past
The memories were never to be faded fast
I had proposed once with the ring
When you were trying to sing
A song of ever lasting joy
I was lost for a moment to enjoy
You looked at with scant respect
As it was stupid and foolish act
I kept quiet and did not react
It was reality of love in fact
You have now feelings of real bond
I was in fact dreaming of no second
You remained most of the time
Never to missed from life any time
I am now fading start in life
It had been troublesome like an edge of knife
You had promised for something
But was uncommitted for anything
I feel some one is touching me with grace
The blood rushed fast on the face
I wait for something new to happen
It is as if I am waiting for some good news even
“I wear it finally on your name” she wrote
I was feet above ground to claim
That happiness is no more illusion
Why was I so far under the cover of confusion?
I kissed clay on ground
Some new message was found
I felt as if some one kissed me from far end
Was it her really sending me signals with clear trend?
Scheme | AABB CCCC DDEE DDFF XGGG XCHH IIDD JJKX XXKK LLMM |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) Tetractys (20%) Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 11110 011110 101011 110101 111010 110101010 11111110 11100110 101010100101 1001001111110 1110110101 010001011101 11011101 1101011 01110101 1111010101 1111101 111100101 111001101 11101101 11110111 1101101110 1011101 101111101 11110101 11110011111 1110110 11010110 1111110111 0111101 111101110 11111110111110 11110011111 11101111 1100111010 11111100101010 11111 111011 11111111111 1101010110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,352 |
Words | 281 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 40 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 110 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Submitted on October 31, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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