Carried away



I am carried away by love flood
 All of sudden heavy rush of blood
 Veins opened up fully to facilitate the flow
 I wished her to hold me to save from blow

 I have lot more ground to cover
 I am drawn near and over to her
 She has all nerves for me with calm gesture
 I see in her volcano for sure

 I hold the hand with gentle power
 The body is gripped with quick fever
 I try to scale on top of the hill
 I demonstrate it through good will

 She has lot more to offer
 Not against it but with lot more words to offer
 I feel little set back with fear
 But she reminds me coolly as dear

 “Don't leave me alone” she stares
 Invites me in open embrace with both the arms to dare
 I take full liberty in holding her hand
 As if the world has reached to an end

 I reach peak with no voice
 It is as if she has calm words with promise
 I loose no second and float
 She is under full control in boat

 I go down with her in safe drive
 I think it is safest way to survive
 Else we could have never become one
 She was destined for me to be one

 I surrender to her might
 She has offered no fight
 All water since then has flowed down to Love Ocean
 I think sky might have blessed us and witnessed the scene
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Submitted on March 15, 2013

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Scheme AABB CCCX CCDD CCEE XXXX XXFF GGHH IIHX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,172
Words 247
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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