Analysis of When Someone Loves you (Poem No. 581)
When someone wants you
No good unless he loves you
With love that so true.
When someone needs you,
It's no good unless he'll stay
with you all the way.... through...
Thrill to be near you.
You need someone to cheer you?
Call me I'll bring stew.
My love is so true,
I'm lost and feeling so blue
When you're not in view.
Loving you my Sweet,
It gives delight to my sleep
Like brown chocolate.
I'll stay with you Dear
In any kinds of weather
To be together.
All my promises
Engrave inside my heart's cage;
Can not be reverse.
The foolish would say,
"Surrender your dignity, "
"if you love me".
But you know better
I'll never take advantage
Your pure innocence.
So, make up your mind
It is now your final chance
It's me or someone ?
If your choice not me,
It's fine, better luck next time
God always have one.
By Ms. Ging
Posted 09-17-13
Scheme | AAA ABA AAA AAA XXX XCC XXX BDD CXX XXE DXE XX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (29%) |
Metre | 1111 1101111 11111 1111 1110111 111011 11111 111111 11111 11111 1101011 11101 10111 1101111 1110 11111 0101110 11010 11100 0101111 11101 01011 0101100 1111 11110 1101010 11100 11111 1111101 1111 11111 1110111 1111 111 10 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 813 |
Words | 161 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 52 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
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