When Someone Loves you (Poem No. 581)
Chain Haiku
When someone wants you
No good unless he loves you
With love that so true.
When someone needs you,
It's no good unless he'll stay
with you all the way.... through...
Thrill to be near you.
You need someone to cheer you?
Call me I'll bring stew.
My love is so true,
I'm lost and feeling so blue
When you're not in view.
Loving you my Sweet,
It gives delight to my sleep
Like brown chocolate.
I'll stay with you Dear
In any kinds of weather
To be together.
All my promises
Engrave inside my heart's cage;
Can not be reverse.
The foolish would say,
"Surrender your dignity, "
"if you love me".
But you know better
I'll never take advantage
Your pure innocence.
So, make up your mind
It is now your final chance
It's me or someone ?
If your choice not me,
It's fine, better luck next time
God always have one.
By Ms. Ging
Posted 09-17-13
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Submitted by ging_a on October 15, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AAA ABA AAA AAA XXX XCC XXX BDD CXX XXE DXE XX |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 813 |
Words | 161 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
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