Analysis of Trangulity of silence



Come now, don't you cry,
you should be happy,
you and I together alone at last,
rase your chin, look into my eyes,
let me chase your worries, with a simple kiss,
you don't need to say, you feel it too ,
I used to hate you,
for playing mind games, but I was wrong,
you played your part well Aradella,
I would not have it any other way, I realize it now,
living twice in one moment of silence,
relax babe, wipe your happy tears off your eyes,
our silence is , our tranquility of silence,
with us, sharing moments of ever last,
I remember when you tease me, in a mystical mind mist,
how your curves were carved by angels,
how I was silenced by your tranquility, then,
there is something I have not told you,
I was scared for my dear life,
taking my first dragon flight, on your back,
I had lost my footing and fell back to the ground, to my doom,
you masterfully caught me just in time,
now I stand silently, next to your tranquility,
this dimension is ours, and it will not be over,
as long as we in each others arms,
we going to help each other through,
you the master of illusion, and I am not under delusion,
we leave in tranquility of silence.

This is my continuation of land Dorell saga of Aradella, in order to get it all, you would have to read “love potion 1,2,3, and 4 of 9”, “to a land of Dorell”, “how I met Aradella” and "I love you Aradalla"  and there will be more.

©malenky malenky
6/26/2014


Scheme XABCXDDEXXFCFBXXXDXXXXAXXDXF X EX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11110 1010100111 11110111 11111010101 111111111 11111 110111111 111111 111111010111011 1010110110 01111101111 10101100100110 1110101101 101011110010011 11101110 111101101001 111011111 1111111 1011101111 111110011101111 1100011101 1111001110100 10101100111110 111101101 110111101 10101010011110010 1100100110 11100101111011010111111111110011011111110111101111 11 1
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,387
Words 274
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 28, 1, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 355
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Submitted on August 23, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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