Analysis of The Transforming Beach



On a sunny evening
At the beach
Children, quiet, as they leave
The day seems to unwind itself
And slowly transforms into the night
There is no sound except for
The gray waves
Crashing against the sandy shore
It is getting darker
And soon, I am the only one that remains

The cloud disappear slowly
As the night darkens
My only friends now are
The bright stars and the full moon
All is silent
I remain where I am not wanting to leave
But it is getting late
And I have to get home
So I slowly walk home
Feeling please that I visited
The transforming beach.


Scheme XABXXCDCXX XDXXXBXEEXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 101 1010111 01110101 010010101 1111011 011 10010101 111010 01110101101 010110 1011 110111 0110011 1110 10111111011 111101 011111 111011 10111100 00101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 533
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 11
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 222
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Sperry

I am a fairly new poet. I started writing poetry a few years ago and I love it. Poetry is a real inspiration to life for me. When I write a poem, I feel very happy. I hope that my poems will be inspirational for other poets too! more…

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