Analysis of The Magic Word "Yes"



-when the magic word; 'YES'
 -wears its natural amour

-the heavens comes down
 -with a rose of the lilies

-Is the unblical word
  that answers the clockwise dreams

-of a man's raging and burnt
 -desires of a heartbeats

-we search for it in the mist
 -of many unanswered questions

-we dream to find it in the hidden
 -palms of the dark hours

-of a man's hungry souls
 -with baton of anxieties

-when it finally comes
 -becomes the costly bride

-gives the dreamer the salt
 -to pinch its pains

-long disappointments disappears
 -like air in the cloudstands

-hopes that was laid on punches bags
 -grows wings to fly

-the heart renders songs of joy
 -to the listening moments

-fulfilments graces the worn faces
 -of the anguish hopes

-the magic word balm
 -that restores the stolen peg of life

-and the life of a man
 -wears a new reed of badges.

By: Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi (C) June, 2014


Scheme AX XB XX XX XX XX XB XX XX XA XX XX XX XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 111001 01011 1011010 1011 110011 1011001 010101 1111001 1101010 111110010 110110 101101 10110100 111001 010101 101001 1111 1001001 11001 11111101 1111 0110111 1010010 1100110 10101 01011 101010111 001101 1011110 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 903
Words 163
Sentences 10
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted on April 19, 2015

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi

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