Analysis of The Bottle



He sees it on the shelf
from the corner of his eye

he can almost smell its taste
an urge he must deny

he wonders  "what is wrong with me?'
it wasnt always this way

there was once a time when
he wasnt so easily persuade

things got rough  and he found comfort
where many so often  do

the lonley bottle on the shelf
crying out to you

but he must fight this feeling
it only causes pain

He must face his problems head on
 and his mind he must retrain

There will always be a bottle
calling out his name

but like times before
he wont react the same

so he turns away with a smile
this war has just begun

but he knows in the end
it will be a war  that he  had won

so you turn away from me
does my foul juices not tempt your weary soul?

you can fight all you want
but i know i have a hold!

so you think you won the war, my friend
well my damage is already done

i caused a havac of a wreck
and believe me "it was fun"  :)


Scheme AB XB CX XX XD AD XE XE XF XF XG HG CX XX HG XG
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1010111 111111 111101 11011111 11111 111011 11110001 11101110 1101101 0110101 10111 1111110 110101 11111011 0111101 1111010 10111 11101 110101 11101101 111101 111001 111011111 1110111 11110111101 111111 1111101 111110111 111010101 1101101 0011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 890
Words 197
Sentences 4
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 13, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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cathy lewis

Hi, i just turned 40. I have 3 teenage daughters and one son who is 10 years. I am married to an awesome man who has changed my life in so many wonderful ways!!! My poems are crazy sad at times... I fight my thoughts daily and it does help me to write them down. But not all poems refer to my life. I actually have a great marriage and family!!One thing i wish about this site is that we could have messageboards or chat. To discuss different poems. I actually put a request in for one hopefully you do too!! Thanks for taking the time to read my twisted poetry. Its not always good but i enjoy writing :) more…

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