Analysis of Thaw



our gazes meet,
blood fills my fingertips

longing to touch,
to feel the softness that encloses deep crystals

i inhale,
faint chills dance down my shoulders

sudden,
frozen in imitation before this trance

frozen,
the essence of you fills my lungs

surrounding,
warmth is radiating, melting

warmth,
i breathe out

exhale,
i am new, i can feel


Scheme XX XX AX BX BX CC XX AX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 11110 1011 1101011110 101 1111110 10 1000100111 10 01011111 010 1110010 1 111 01 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 322
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alex Alaniz

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