Analysis of System defiant



SYSTEM  DEFIANT

I bemoan my own poverty
Of ignorance
On intricate internet matters.

Today when I asked it
To go to the hell
It went into the heaven.

When I clicked on the mouse
To take something  forward
It guided it backward
Oh ! Unskilled fingers .

So I folded my own body into four
To become a computer frame
And put some thorns around
But alas! It could not hold anything in.

I bemoan my own poverty
Of ignorance
On intricate internet matters ;

Oh ! I am flabbergasted.
This system is like my child.

Realising my poverty
I opted to be a poet.
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Scheme x ABC xxx xddc xxxx ABC xx ax
Poetic Form
Metre 10010 10111100 1100 11001010 011111 11101 1101010 111101 111010 110110 10110 11101110011 10100101 011101 1011111100 10111100 1100 11001010 111100 1101111 11100 11011010 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 604
Words 107
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 4, 4, 3, 2, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on May 09, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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