Analysis of Sorry, Good-Bye Rhyme



No more split-tongue, stutter-butter,
Time to skip my all time rhyme-mutter;
What is this prescription lain diction,
Other than some addiction to fiction?

No one really talks this way anyway,
Cept' to smother word on your face;
Can't you see this is pompous folly,
A Dr. Seuss in your goose, by golly!

My diagnosis under review pending,
For better or worse my rhyme ending;
I've tried to write in manner less bold,
My surprise, that way too, solid sold!


Scheme AABB XXCC DDEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11111010 111111110 111010110 1011010110 111011110 11101111 111111010 011011110 101010110 110111110 111101011 101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 452
Words 80
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on July 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tracy Bollinger

Always liked to write and have written poems periodically over the years. I've never shared them withanyone except for immediate family. Decided to take the plunge and put some out 'there'. But bearwith me, I don't really know what I'm doing. This is therapy of sorts and I hope to let go of the need to rhyme. It's a mental condition. I recently found out my grandmother used to rhyme all herletters to anyone. Go figure. I hope you all enjoy my ranting! I do like what I've seen other's post. more…

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