Analysis of Precious Living Moments Memory Won't Forsake



If love could have held you
you'd still be at our side
Sharing plans, hopes and dreams,
the future un-denied

Time has claimed your body,
yet from us did not take
precious living moments
memory won't forsake

A sensing of your presence
though anguished in our tear
Your spirit surrounds us
In heart and mind you're near


Scheme XAXA XBXB XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 111111 1111101 101101 010101 111110 111111 101010 100101 0101110 1100101 110011 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 306
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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