Analysis of Old Soldiers Never Die, They Just Go Out Of Print



On post again tonight, this tattered army
Waits with stiffened spines, lines locked, stock still
As a palace guard, untouched as a musty past
That perished when the hearts of books, like men,
Curled, moaning, inward into inner darkness,
Finally turning up their frozen toes.

How their dusty ranks recall those ghosts
Of glory, all those storied years before
The long retreat was blown. Just sniff their covers,
A whiff of moustache wax and musket powder,
Oiled swords. And listen to an age’s
Pageantry parading grandly toward us…

Here they come! To patriotic cheers,
Fifes twittering amid the boom of drums,
A burst of British Grenadiers. “Eyes Rrright!”,
A twirl of sticks and black batons, raised rifles,
Ranks of stolid Black-and-Tans and Scots,
Their swirling Black Watch tartans bright as blood
Below the brilliant black of bearskin hats.

And then the thud of big black-booted tread,
The slap of snapping flags, the clap of hands
To sides, a sudden silence broken by
The drone of pipe and tabor, and the crack
Of rapped commands, the whack of stocks on stone,
The swipe of whetted blades, the clash of sabres,
Flashing in the sun that never set…

Except it did, of course. Now little’s left
But ghostly echoes wafting down the halls
Of decades near bereft of hope. These old
Battalions, and their fading pages still
Recalling brighter times, are all that blocks
A backward, awkward, crabbed advance, a heart
Of darkness in a bleak and blackened age.

And even these, once drafted by the dreams
Of long ago, are slipping slowly backward
Out of memory, their gold medallions,
Like those sabres, tarnished, scarlet tartans
Scarred and slashed, splashed black with bloody splotches,
Battered bearskins snagged on splintered drumsticks.

Still, no tears for them. No flowers, please.
However age-encrusted they’ve become,
I’ll let no harm befall them. Dim and musty,
Yes, but they’ll survive the night, old soldiers
In reserve, on guard both soon and late,
Till sunrise, when the hearts of men, like books,
Begin the long march home. They also serve…


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010111010 111011111 101010110101 1101011111 11010011010 1001011101 11101111 1101110101 01011111110 0111101010 110101110 10001010011 11110101 11010111 01110111 01110101110 111010101 110111111 010101111 0101111101 0111010111 1101010101 0111010001 1101011111 01110101110 100011101 0111111101 1101010101 1011011111 0100110101 0101011111 0101010101 1100010101 0101110101 11011101010 1110011010 111010101 101111101 10111101 111111101 101010101 11110111010 1110101110 001111101 111011111 0101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,022
Words 343
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7, 7, 7, 6, 7
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 232
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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