Analysis of My Love



My Love,
I know your perfections
I have them filed,
Somewhere in a rusty box.
They are invisible, to most.
I know your fingers
Long and slim,
tasting slightly of salt.
I know your eyes,
Charcoal smudged
burning passion into mine.
I know your lips
plump and swollen.
After our passionate love-making.
I know your smell
the sweet and the sour,
that lingers on your breath.
My heart is briming
with your torturous love notes.
I feel like I've dived off a cliff
Into a thunderstom.
I burst into flames
From your touch.
I want to take my skin off
And leave it here with you.
So you won't forget
that I belong to you.


Scheme ABCBDBEFBGHBIJKLMJBNEBOPQRQ
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 1111 100101 11010011 11110 101 101011 1111 11 1010011 1111 1010 1010100110 1111 010010 110111 1111 111011 11111101 0101 11011 111 1111111 011111 11101 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 585
Words 115
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 476
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dee Edgett

I am a 60 year old womam, married 42 years. Live on a farm in Canada. Mother, grandmother. Love to write. Poems are a new adventure. I have had story stories and articles published. more…

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