Analysis of My Armour



I stand in an armour of silver and gold
Among the fallen soldiers in the sea of souls
A helmet harboring my insecure mind
Villages burning, ignited by a silent whisper
As I cautiously wander through this blood infested sea
The trees lay down their crowns and slowly turn from me
I grasp for air as the weight of this suit
slowly drags me under water
I’m absorbed by the simplicity of every drop
The simplicity of a lie
I won the battle, I lost it all
Our child is yours.


Scheme ABCDEEFDGHIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11011011001 010101000111 01010011001 10010010101010 11100101110101 011111010111 1111101111 10111010 10110010011001 00100101 110101111 10111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 461
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 376
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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gustavsten

Gustav is a writer from Sweden. He is 19 years old and has always had a profound love for the english language. He is also a classical pianist and a composer. more…

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