Analysis of Love



There would be heaven
in stranger's eyes
as new friends lock words.

(There is heaven
in your imagined eyes,
friendship's beauty locks me.)

There would be bliss
as the sparkle left
the corners and laughed.

(There is bliss
as I catch the sparkle
and wrap it in honey.)

There would be delight
in finding someone special
inside a magical existence.

(There is delight
in finding you within
a world consisting of thought.)

There would be love
in the giggles thrown
across different worlds.

(There is love
in the giggles that
shake my body.)

There would be friendship;
sealed with a kiss,
that captures immortality.

(There is friendship born
and sealed with mouths
that jump from the screen.)

There would be petals
spinning passion from
tiny red roses carved.

(There are petals
bleeding red magic
from the coloured ink.)

There would be everything
that time could give
in its blessing nod.

(There is everything
time allows in learning
of another's soul.)


Scheme ABX ABC DXX DEC FEX FXX GXX GXC XDC XXX HXX HXX IXX IIX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 0101 11111 1110 010101 11011 1111 10101 01001 111 111010 011010 11101 010110 010100010 1101 010101 0101011 1111 00101 011001 111 00101 1110 11110 1101 1100100 11101 0111 11101 11110 10101 101101 1110 10110 10101 11110 1111 01101 1110 101010 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 905
Words 167
Sentences 15
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on August 23, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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