Analysis of life after being a teenager



i don't know whats sacred and what is not sacred  anymore.
my body or my bible.
all i'm saying is that ,the touch of a man feels more wanted than the thought of  a holy bible.
the feeling i get reaches through my body with excitment compare to a boring book with spirtual   guidance to life.
im lost ,lost in the world of sins
i do not know myself anymore
who am i ? who am i to chase after lust?
i'm losing myself
i'm abandoning my creator
the man who died on the christ for my sins.
why am i runing after something so unreal and so unfaithful to me.
what will lust do for me after i die?


Scheme ABBCDAEFGDHI
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001111001 1101110 111011011011110101101010 01011101110110110101111011 11100111 1111101 11111111101 1101 101001010 0111101111 111110101010101011 1111111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 578
Words 119
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 451
Words per stanza (avg) 124
Font size:
 

Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

36 sec read
5

Discuss this suzy Q poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "life after being a teenager" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/76795/life-after-being-a-teenager>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    23
    hours
    29
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The word "poetry" is from the Greek term "poiesis", which means?
    A Reading
    B Saying
    C Writing
    D Making