teen love



my lover left me like yesterdays leftovers
screaming in silence this relationship is over .
without a word
he left me

he left me thinking i have became old

unable to be to be sold
i have became an abandon house.
so ugly
with walls full of mold
so he left me

whenevr he.mentions my name
his throat clocks up with anger
he feels sick
so green
unable to lean
backwards ,forwards
he's immobile
i made him lose who he really is
so he left me

doeant he realized that im a girl nd my heart breaks faster than a soap bubble?
the touch he touched me with was just a touch
no feelings to support it
and the kiss he kissed me with was just to moist my lips .
im falling
my lover forgot i existed
so he left me
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaxb c cxbcB xaxddxexB exxxxxB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 673
Words 141
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 5, 9, 7

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