Analysis of Lasting Reverie
I did not love, could not love freely, because society would not let me.
Please know—I loved and yearned for you deeply, and strongly
I remember your beauty, your unique desire, atrophy slowly, gently starving.
You too would not dare have me.
Obedient souls, derelict from deprivation.
Passionate, and vigorous men lost in the lifelessness of someone else’s directive.
How often now I think fondly of what might have been
Ignorance, now, has walked away, leaving brilliant clarity
Nothing will ever be as they seem.
I live tentatively, even in “natural” places.
Leisurely seducing me is self-hate and melancholy
Addictive, pleasures that slowly work wickedly—to numb and depreciate
I give in so easily—it is what is wanted of me—to feel badly
For who I am
I keep looking only through their white window.
Is not my own sufficient?
My window, vivid, vibrant, and lively.
How shall I live life?
Should I?
Or is it in death, they prefer me?
I am sleep now, yesterday as well, and tomorrow too.
I am hidden
I shall prevent you pointing at me
I shall fade away.
Back into the reverie that keeps me soundly, safely, and receptively.
Scheme | AAXABXX AXXAXAXXXAXXA XBAXX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (24%) |
Metre | 1111111100101001111 1111011110010 1010110101010100101010 1111111 01001101010 1000100110011110010 1101111011111 100111011010100 101101111 11100010010010 10001011110100 010101101100110010 1101100111110111110 1111 11101011110 1111010 1101010010 11111 11 111011011 111110110011 1110 110111011 11101 1010100111101001 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,115 |
Words | 194 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 13, 5 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 296 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 65 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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