Analysis of July 5 (All Your Life)



I do not care for the paunchy guy
Who wears a smile to hide what he cannot...
In nice clothes, gold, food and friends.
I care for what you have become:
A distant reflection of what was once a child
That talked and sang like an angel.
And knowing me, like you know me--
All your life,
You know that I care for the absolute...
That right is right and wrong is wrong;
That there is no "in-between"
Or maybe. Only either/or.
I was born--a dad, thirty one years ago, today.
So, as I say, "Maligayang Kaarawan" to you,
Say "likewise" to me. I can use it,
Because I feel like I died after
Talking to you on the phone--realizing that,
Indeed, you are no longer 'that' child who,
Once upon a time was her daddy's little girl.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQNR
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101 1101111110 0111101 11111101 010010111101 11011110 01011111 111 111111010 11110111 1111001 11010101 1110110110101 11111111 11111111 011111110 10111011001 0111110111 101011010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 698
Words 138
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 534
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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