Analysis of It seemed just like a normal morning

it seemed just like normal morning when he woke up
the birds outside were singing their usual tuneful melody
he climbed out of his small bed to put on his old glasses
then looked out the window and opened his eyes to see
what he saw he could not believe, for the sky was green
and on the blue grass there was a giant snail whistling
dogs were flying while six legged birds buried tiny bones
he stood there in awe with his mouth opened wondering
a noise a bell rung from a hairy butterfly's square wings
as it fluttered around the legs of a duck in a plaid suit
the mail box was boxing with a three headed kangaroo
who was wearing a dress and one polka dotted boot
out in the street he saw the postman on a pogo stick
putting parcels into the mouths of a pink and yellow cats
a cow drove past in a toy bus with checkered windows
carrying a group of army ants each holding baseball bats
some fat bees squeaked as they rode upon a huge mouse
saying hello to the trees as they played a game of cards
it started to rain upwards as the purple sun spun around
then seven marbles sat up and began to sing like bards
suddenly there was an earthquake in the metal clouds
and they cracked opened releasing lumps of cold lead
the man had enough of was he saw outside the window
and climbed dumbfounded back into his comfortable bed

two minutes later his daughter came in to his bedroom
''looks like dad must of found his birthday present. i see''
as she walk over towards the large window in the corner
''and he has been watching a music video clip on the t,v.''

Poetic Form
Metre 111110101111 0111010110010100 11111111111110 1110100101111 1111110110111 0101111010110 10101110110101 1110111110100 0101110101011 111001011010011 0111101011001 1110010110101 1001110101011 101001011010101 0111001111010 100011101110111 111111101011 10011011110111 110111010101101 11010110011111 100111100101 011100101111 01101111111010 01100101110001 1101011010111 111111111011 111100101100010 01111001010011011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,550
Words 302
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 24, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 619
Words per stanza (avg) 150
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Submitted on August 26, 2013

1:30 min read

Mick Reid

I like to write all sorts of themes in my poetry. i mainly use rhyming poetry, some from personal experiences and some from characters i develop in my mind. i can be very strong with emotional use in my poetry. some have little twists, real life situations, humor and of course love, sadness, ect. more…

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