Analysis of I'm So Close To You!!! (Very Touching Love Poem)



I'm so close to you,
 But in my heart i never knew,
 I seen you for a day or two,
 You remember everything i say to you,
 Love how you listen,
 You got such a glow you glisten,
 I accomplish my mission.
 I love it when you love to be around,
 You stand your ground.
 Don't let nobody change you!
 I'm so close to you, I will sustain you,
 Through the heartbreak, if there is one,
 I'm so close to you, let's see what us will become.
I want it to be love,
And us holding each other as the wind,
Blows through your hair,
A day like today, Where we are not aware,
Of what this will become,
Only excited because we are together,
Sharing this moment, like it's a romantic dinner,
My love for you will not get thinner!


Scheme AAAABBBCCAABDEFGGDHHH
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10111101 11110111 1010101111 11110 11101110 1010110 1111111101 1111 11111 1111111011 1011111 111111111101 111111 0110110101 1111 01101111101 111101 100100111010 1011011001010 111111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 692
Words 141
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 528
Words per stanza (avg) 141
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Submitted on August 14, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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