Analysis of I'LL Just Hang



Maybe someday it will make perfect sense.
the war between the mind and heart, the heart wins.
I'll put down my guard and forget my defenses
and let the pain come again and fall on my skin.

Maybe one day, I will be rewarded
for being too sincere in loving you silently.
You don't need to know, let tears shed.
I will be responsible for the pains it'll cost me.

Because I love you more than my pains,
I go after your safety for I don't want you to hurt again.
My love for you runs through my veins,
and I guess I'll wait for you to love me, only God knows when.

I don't need reasons to hold on to, but I'll hold on.
You will find me even if I had said that I'd be gone.
I love you too much, it hurts me just like a pang..
I don't know where this is taking me but I'll just hang..

I'll put my heart on the line and wait for a miracle.
You won't need to ask but I'll just be faithful.
Though I always felt strongly for you, I never sang.
I will wait for the day you will see me, I'll just hang.


Scheme XXXX XAXA BCBC XXDD EEDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 101111011 01010101011 111110011010 010110101111 1011111010 1101010101100 11111111 11101001011011 011111111 1110110111111101 11111111 011111111110111 1111011111111 11111011111111 111111111101 1111111011111 11111010110100 11111111110 111110111101 1111011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 971
Words 207
Sentences 16
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on August 31, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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