Analysis of I will always be there



I will help you to discover, what it's like to really live
To be happy, content and to give life all you can give
I will give you the strength to discover yourself in the process
Then you can find your very own beautiful princess

I will help you to write in the book of love
Breathe life back into those that may need a tug
To give a gift of love, after life has broken their trust
And to bring two people together who need it the most

I will help you paint life as if it were a beautiful canvas
Give you all of lifes colours to rejoice and to languish
A wonderful painting, a canvas that you can accomplish
Bringing bright colors, soft textures, and a gift of true love


Scheme XXAA BXXX XCCB
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101111101 11101001111111 111101101001001 1111110110010 11111100111 11101111101 11011110111011 01111001011101 1111111110010010 1111111010110 010010010111010 10110110001111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 659
Words 133
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

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