Analysis of Habeas Corpus



I tried to fight the law
But the law had the upper hand
Cut my legs out from under me
And left me with no place to land
Plight for the pie
Left me reaching for the sky
Wasn't mine for the taking
But I still had a taste for the lie

'Cause the world raised me up
To be a stick up kid
Whatever I wanted, I could have it
And what you got, I'm gonna get it
Unaware of what came with it
All Judge, no jury
And an all day sentence
That was handed down in a hurry

Like Snow on the Bluff
My criminal life's a running record
Stealin' and dealin' with every minute
Through an open lens confessional
I was holdin' a smokin' gun
And now my freedom's on hiatus
There's nowhere for me to run
Within a thirty mile radius

Habeas Corpus -
Borne identity of a carcass
Carcinogenic since the beginning
Deliberate impenitence
With a haughtiness
Written down statements
In the prosecution's accusation
As soon as I heard the charges
My heart started breakin'

My mind started to wake up
All of a sudden, I'm prayin' to God:
"Our Father who is in heaven
With whom I'm currently at odds
Have mercy on me today
Please, don't send me away
I'm a lowly, wretched sinner
And You're the only one
Who can save me..."


Scheme XABACCDC EXFFFBGB XXXXHIHI IIDGGXHXH EXHXJJXHB
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 10110101 11111101 01111111 1101 1110101 1011010 111101101 101111 110111 101101111 011111011 0111111 11110 011110 111010010 11101 1100101001 101110010 111010100 111011 011101010 111111 010101100 10010 101001010 001010010 01001 101 10110 00010010 11111010 11101 1110111 110101111 101011010 11110011 1101101 111101 10101010 010101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,143
Words 232
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 9, 9
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on October 29, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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