Analysis of Extremes



As calm as silence; in between soft breath,
whispers collect thawed romantic notions,
the world is pregnant with delicious peace
as she pours another gin and tonic
into the wild depth of her ice cool glass.
Musical atmospheric bliss shimmers
as birdsong wraps her spirit in roses;
fragrant imaginative palpable
wonder which gathers colourful shadows.
An ecstatic buzz wanders through her smiles
while artistic deliverance sips hours;
quiet sections where fingers mix the mind.

She trips and the glass rolls across vision
before it shatters on the floor's hard wood,
screams bubble on furious lips before
being popped by violent twisted cold hate.
Rage coughs a fit of stylish malice out,
curtains twitch in poetic fear as fists
crash against the table's surrendered shine.
Enthusiastically paintings erupt
into motion; they pay a warm visit
to alcoholic insanity's door
as she continues to wreak havoc on
self-pity's frightened lowered look of pain.


Scheme XXXXXAXXXXAX XXBXXXXXXBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111000111 1001101010 0111010101 1110101010 0101110111 100010110 111010010 1001000100 1011011 1010110101 10100100110 1010110101 1100110110 0111010111 1101100101 10111001011 1101110101 1010010111 1010100101 001001001 0110110110 101011 1101011101 111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 926
Words 151
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 12
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 390
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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