Analysis of Coneulia



A crowded room and walls of green,
an image of beauty is set in this scene.
Your hair is flowing and full of life,
like a fire of auburn rays delight.
And your eyes that twinkle throughout each day.
Seem light and piercing in a hypnotic way.
Your smile so sweet it can make me melt.
I know this feeling is something we felt.
A stimulating beauty, this you are,
like a brilliant blazing distant star.
But before I met you my skies were gray.
Cold and lonely, stormy days.
A life I've grown accustomed to.
Striving to isolate to make it through.
I try to move on and at times I can not.
I know with persistence you could gain allot.
For walls come down as they become weak,
and this may blossom if it is what you seek.
So to you this is what I say.
I enjoy your smile and laugh each day.
And it is of you that I think and miss
to hopefully one day steal a kiss.


Scheme AABCDDEEFFDGHHIIJJDDKK
Poetic Form
Metre 01010111 11011011011 111100111 1010110101 0111100111 11010000101 111111111 1111011011 010010111 101010101 1011111101 1010101 01110101 101101111 11111011111 11101011101 111111011 01110111111 11111111 101110111 0111111101 110011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 838
Words 173
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 663
Words per stanza (avg) 173
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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