Analysis of Blinded



If you fly too close to the sun, you're poised to plummet.
But sometimes we choose to fly too high; by choice we fall.
We cross that line; that proverbial "point of no return".
On the way up, we revel; coming down, we're humbled.

When there's so much to attain and plenty to gain,
The choice is easy; the decision, discernable,
Because the sun is lovely, its excellence is plain.
You'll risk your sight simply to behold its allure.

But when there's nothing to lose, you lose your wax wings.
Despite your descent, it's easy to forgive.
Because it's better to be blinded by perfection,
And to know her name, than to never percieve it at all.


Scheme XAXX BABX XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111110 1011111111111 11111010011101 1011110101110 111110101011 0111000101 0101110110011 111110101101 111101111111 01101110101 0111011101010 0110111101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 628
Words 117
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Calvin Morrow

Calvin Morrow is an alias. All my poetry is about one single woman. I really like reviews so I can perfect it. Maybe one day she'll know... more…

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