Analysis of Being; Supple (Pantoum)



Dark forges in, and I have no fear.
 I must take myself to places unknown.
I’m following dreams wherever they go,
 Diving in at the end of a l o n g
 pier.

In the palm of my hand I want to show, that
dark forges in, and I have no fear.
 The crystal ball is becoming clearer,
I’m following dreams wherever they go.

My life is my boat to steer
 in the palm of my hand. I want to show that
the more I see, the more I know.
 The crystal ball is becoming clearer.

The clearer it becomes, the brighter it glows.
My life is my boat to steer
 into the unknown, with no fear, because
the more I see,
 t h e m o r e I k n o w.


Scheme AxBca DAEB ADbE xAxcx
Poetic Form
Metre 110001111 111111001 1100101011 100101101111 1 00111111111 110001111 0101101010 1100101011 1111111 00111111111 01110111 0101101010 01010101011 1111111 0100111101 0111 11111111111100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 603
Words 134
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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