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Walking Pantoum

jorie_raschein

Like a mad man in trouble
With my hands tied
Giving up the struggle
Giving up the fight

With my hands tied
I can no longer win
Giving up the fight
Letting you in

I can no longer win
I have nothing to lose
Letting you in
Because it’s you I choose

I have nothing to lose
Not sight of what I’ve become
Because it’s you I choose
So I have already won

Giving up the struggle
Not sight of what I’ve become
Like a mad man in trouble
I have already won
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAC BDCD DEDE EFEg AFAg
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 433
Words 93
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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