Analysis of Alaknanda Patel Arti(Apa)



alaknanda patel arti(apa)pitchers of love
water your orchids;while my gardens lie all
dry,dead,and deceased with no water to revive
me ever thirsty
apa side to side i seek things that i cannot
see;and i grab the things that i do not miss
why did you,why did you stand on me?!
then retreat touching me with your enchanted
love beads;apa,apa,apa;now the night stretch
endless;days dissect dreams;your love`s my
love`s only complementary;apa,apa,apa please
do believe am dying everyday by an inch
sinking,sinking,sinking in the whirlpool of
loveless beliefs
o come rescue me;i`m in thee wanna cultivate
culture forever my love seeds;and then season
shall come giving out new leaves,new petals
new flowery feasts burning all twilight
shunning all sunshine
excepting you in me!


Scheme ABCDEFDGHIJKALMNOPQD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101111011 101111011 1011110101 11010 11111111110 1110111111 11111111 10110111010 11011 101111 11011 101110101111 10011 1001 11101011010 10010111110 111011110 110011011 1011 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 753
Words 140
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 628
Words per stanza (avg) 121
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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