Neelam



Neelam 69 inch your sister screams wanting
and not wanting the pleasure-preached-priest
pricks of the pleasure-prince!
Deep in the night while the nightingales in
the nights knee-deep-knight
Neelam 71 inch I`m stable,I`m still;she takes
me in,pulling me in her love endless
perpetual lips---
Setting me in motion,unstoppable beats
Nelam,Nelam why she rejects;yet she recoils
in happiness as the Phenix rises;flapping his
immortal wings `neath her soft,sweet,sylvan
chaste,satin skin
Nela,Nela please go tell your sis my Mosque
is void,Church is empty,Pagoda lay lifeless
still;Temple shed tears of the lovelorn tulip
Seeing her thus adamant,unfeeling--
Wallowing in her own well of wistfull thinkin
Arti,what happened?Have you discovered the
other side of my Sin?!
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKDDLGMADND
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 745
Words 128
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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