Analysis of I am awake
Holly Flame Maxey 1976 (baltimore)
I am trying to understand
Either you do not remember or...you just forgot?
You were the one who woke me…..
I am not enlightened, but I am awake
What now? What are your plans for me
My beloved
I like feeling you deep inside me
The deeper you go the softer and wetter I become
Until I drown in the warmth of your soul
And I can feel eternity calling our names
If i can not be with you; my love
I might as well be a millionaire
Money always comes second to Love
Money does not bring happiness
Only a distraction until death overtakes me
I wish it was you that would overtake me instead
Arouse my desires
Follow the path least taken
And It will lead us both home
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Metre | 1110101 101110101101 1001111 11101011101 11111111 101 111011011 01011010010101 0111001111 0111010010101 111111111 11111001 10111011 10111100 100010011101 111111110101 011010 1001110 0111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 644 |
Words | 132 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 4, 9 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 173 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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