Analysis of "Our Fathers House" ©

Deborah 1964 (sacramento)



I'll leave this world the way I came,
no possessions, lacking shame.

I shall not fear of where I go,
for the Bible say's God love’s us so.

Don't worry should your faith be weak,
It grows the more of God you seek.

He gave us a heart to hear his voice,
His word we trust, we shall rejoice.   

The news that's sent from up above,
tells of a place so full of love,
wrapped in warmth, souls flying free,
in our Fathers house for eternity.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 1010101 11111111 101011111 11011111 11011111 111011111 11111101 01111101 11011111 1011101 01010110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 425
Words 86
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Modified on March 11, 2023

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