Analysis of David’s Description

Brenda De Jesus 1970 (Brooklyn)



If I were asked what color are your eyes...
I’d say chocolate

and when the sun rays light them up
they become the color of sweet honey

And your smile speaks volumes of how genuinely happy you are when your dimples appear

your ageless soft skin, makes me want to draw every inch of you with my finger tips

Your lips are full of pleasure , I’m so inclined to seduce

But what I noticed most about you!
Is that gentle loving soul that needs reassurance
Of how much love it can receive!

like the wind that kiss your cheeks
I want to be the one to fulfill your soul with nothing but pure love!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101110111 1110 01011111 1010101110 0111101110001011111001 110111111110011111101 11111101101101 111101011 111010111010 11111101 1011111 11110110111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 585
Words 114
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on February 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brenda De Jesus

NYC native who resides in South Florida is a poet enthusiast and lover for many years! From American to international poetry, this amateur poet has no preference of where and what language it’s written in when it comes to love poems! more…

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