Analysis of My Dying Rage



Forever an outsider,
a key without a door

Locked in your detention,
its barrier secure

Always on the outside,
forever looking in

My actions well intended,
your eyes see only sin

I spend my time in silence,
rejection as a friend

These years I serve in exile,
one word from you could end

The walls keep growing thicker,
blank paper for a cage

My spark now just a flicker
—to light my dying rage

(Villanova Pennsylvania: January, 2017)


Scheme AX XX XB XB XC XC AD AD X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101010 010101 101010 110001 11011 010100 1101010 111101 1111010 010101 111101 111111 0111010 110101 1111010 111101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 418
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 30, 2017

Modified by KurtPhilipBehm on July 04, 2019

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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