Analysis of Shadows of the Day

Mathew L. Hunt 1973 (Los Alamitos, CA)



On our very long journey through life, one must know
The car's windshield is the ultimate foreshadow.
Even the ignorant knows this to be true,
But even they could not tell it to you.
They are too busy in a world of bliss
Skirting around what I would surely miss.

We fight and struggle to stay a part
Of the game of chance that is an art.
The winner doesn't always cross the finish line
Nor do those who cross the finish line always shine.
Each of us must choose wisely our lot in life.
Shouldn't it be worth all the pain and strife?

The fool may rule the land for a time.
Punishment awaits him for his crime.
May you someday prove worthy and wise.
I have tried to be the wisest fool
In this world that is so harsh and cruel.

The shadows lurk, but are not truly cast
Until a time comes, that we did not ask.


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFF GGXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011011111 01110100010 10010011111 1101111111 1111000111 1001111101 110101101 101111111 01010110101 11111010111 111111010101 1011110101 011101101 100011111 11111001 111110101 0111111010 011111101 0101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 816
Words 175
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

I wrote this in graduate school.

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Written on 1997

Submitted by mathewhunt on May 11, 2024

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