Analysis of Alone in my room
Marne Poll 1973 (Welland)
Alone in my room
I’m in my bed
And your not here
Here those noises again.
You say their only in my head
I text your phone , but you don’t reply
I try hard not to cry
I hate being alone
I wish you would pick up your phone
Why did you have to go and leave us all alone
Thoughts running through my head
I try to finally lay down my head
I close my eyes and only see you
You said you loved me
You said you cared
I only wish my feelings were spared
You don’t understand why I feel this way
Maybe I should just go away
Scheme | ABCDBEEFFFBBGHIIJJ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011 1011 0111 111001 11110011 111111101 111111 111001 11111111 111111011101 110111 1111001111 111101011 11111 1111 110111001 110111111 10111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 535 |
Words | 127 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 396 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 112 |
About this poem
Basically I was in an almost 30 year marriage . My husband decided to be unfaithful to me and our vows .
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