Analysis of The mirror



Always used but I am hardly loved by my owners
They stare into all of my eyes, every shard of me stares back with envy
I don’t know why they insist on being here if they hate looking at me
Unless its not me they hate

I figured as much since they stare with tears in their eyes
I feel as if harnessing their darkest fears-
Keeping them from their deepest desires.

Im smashed into shards of pain
Still staring with 1000 eyes, I think they call it the thousand yard stare
Watching my owner breathe heavy with guilt
Their painful satisfaction ties a noose around it and replaces it
As they feel like a winner beating their opponent-
Beating me

As if my owner isnt finished with me
Still needing the final blow-
Im picked up and even with my final defenses shedding red tears from their hand-
They throw me against the wall-
Shattering me to the point of blindness
Though I cannot see with my eyes-
I can feel their cries
Knowing I always win-
Beating them


Scheme ABBX CXA XXXXXB BXXXXCCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011110 1101111110011111110 111110111011111011 0111111 1101111111011 11111001101 1011110010 1101111 110111111101011 1011011011 11001010101100101 1111010101010 101 1111011011 1100101 11101011100101011111 1110101 1001101110 11101111 11111 10111 101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 957
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 6, 9
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

A poem about looking in the mirror and not knowing its looking back

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Written on April 18, 2024

Submitted by shyana_n on April 26, 2024

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