Analysis of My Last...

jeffrey scott simpson 1972 (Kentucky)



Clouds destin to appear, my thoughts flood with fear,
rain is pushing down on my beaten shoulders,
tears dripping down my face filling with regret,
losing my courage with every breath, lighting seizes
my senses, the thunder attacks the beat of my heart, feeling of dispear captures my faith, my soul weakens,
my fate lets me dream my past, the future is to become my last stand.


Scheme ABCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111111 11101111010 11011110101 10110110011010 1100100101111101110111110 11111110101101111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 379
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 301
Words per stanza (avg) 67

About this poem

decisions that you have to make throughout life my feel think the weight of the world is on your shoulders. there are things in our life me regret, love, hate. but you have to pull your life together to make that last stand.

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Written on February 04, 2024

Submitted by jsimpson on March 04, 2024

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