Analysis of Merchant of Soul



Why does no one come
to my sincere stall?
It's market day at school,
where we showcase, for all,

our products of beauty.
Our creations. Our work.
For them to recognize
our inner worth.

Hello! Excuse me!
Would you like to see my gems?
It's made from hopes and dreams.
Cased in my spirit's hems.

But they walk on by
without noticing my smile.
Perhaps they didn't mean to.
Perhaps it's guile.

Katie's stall's the best!
I'm sure she'll win.
Everyone comments
about her ideas within.

But it's fine if they don't come.
I have Daddy here.
A day-off from helping
people calm their fear.

He's a social worker, see.
Consoling all who are lost.
Finding them a home
without charging a cost.

Daddy says it's crucial
that I enter this show.
It's not about who buys.
It's about how I grow.

By exposing my gems
I'll reveal my soul,
see my color's beauty,
and make me whole.

So I'll keep my stall open
for today and all tomorrows.
If my gems stay dust free,
they won't turn into sorrows.


Scheme ABXB CXDX CEXE XFXF XGXG AXXX CXXX XHDH EICI XJCJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (70%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 11111 11011 110111 11111 1010110 10010101 11110 10101 01011 1111111 111101 101101 11111 0110011 0111011 0111 1101 1111 1010 01001001 1111111 11101 011110 10111 1010101 0101111 10101 011001 101110 111011 110111 101111 101011 10111 11110 0111 1111110 1010101 111111 1110110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 979
Words 219
Sentences 28
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

We all are God's children. He wants us to show our beautiful selves to the world. Sometimes, without receiving recognition, we get disheartened. The real magic, though, is when we recognize ourselves.

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Written on February 02, 2024

Submitted by lugesan_r on February 02, 2024

Modified by lugesan_r on February 03, 2024

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Lugesan Reddy

I'm new to writing poems. Tried my hand at short stories a few times, but it didn't feel quite right. It's been a great journey with poetry thus far! Looking forward to sharing and learning from fellow members, as we go on this adventure together. more…

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