Analysis of I Stop and I Think



When I wake up in the morning,
As my thoughts are forming.
I look at the empty pillow beside me,
And I tell myself "it's good to be free".
I don't need someone to bind me.

These are lies I tell myself.
Sometimes they seem to help.
I've been in the dating scene.
It seems all men want the same thing.
Either a girl on their arm, to wear as a charm,
Or they're looking for a honey
Who has lots of money.

Everyday I stop and think why?
Why not just give up and die?
No one else cares about love.
People don't want to be part of
Something meaningful.
They're mindlessly driving a vehicle.

It seems that people have forgotten,
How to be kind, they treat others rotten.
Where can all the humans be?
What happened to humanity?

All I see are robots.
How is it that everyone forgot?
They've forgotten how to be real.
They've forgotten how to feel.

Everyday, I stop and think why?
Why is it I live this life?
Struggling to get by.
This life only seems to bring strife.

When I go to work,
In the shadows people lurk.
People's agendas are hidden.
Now this world is war-ridden.

Shadows of what humanity was.
People, look at the stars above!
Open your eyes!
Just give it a try!
You're not the only here.
Look around at your peers.

Everyday I stop and think, why?
Why are we here if no one will try?
Try to be kind to one another.
Treat your neighbor like a brother.

When I go to the bar,
All I see are avatars.
People put on their mask.
Reciting lines like part of a cast.
Somehow they're all part of the same show.
Somehow I'm the only one now in the know.

Everyday I stop and think.
Our ship is going to sink.
I'm tired of the games people play.
There's not much else I can say.
Tell me, why does it have to be this way?


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110010 111110 11101010011 011111111 1111111 111111 011111 1100101 11111011 100111111101 11101010 111110 10111011 1111101 1111011 10111111 10100 1100100100 111101010 1111111010 1110101 11010100 11111 11111001 10101111 1010111 10111011 1111111 100111 11101111 11111 001101 10010110 1111110 11101001 10110101 1011 11101 110101 101111 10111011 111111111 111111010 11101010 111101 111110 101111 010111101 11111011 1101011001 1011101 10111011 110101101 1111111 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,720
Words 399
Sentences 47
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6, 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by navial.64963 on November 21, 2023

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